[... well. He was doing well until he decided to speak again, at least.
It stares at him for a moment, eyebrows raised; it opens its mouth, pauses, and then speaks, choosing its words carefully.]
That's... ah. A little bit... much. [It catches his cheek with its fingers, the look on its face somewhere between amused and secondhand embarrassment.] But your delivery was better. Most partners would find something like that a little too... violent.
[But it was, at least, a good try, and the enthusiasm is there. The energy is right; the word choice, however...]
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It stares at him for a moment, eyebrows raised; it opens its mouth, pauses, and then speaks, choosing its words carefully.]
That's... ah. A little bit... much. [It catches his cheek with its fingers, the look on its face somewhere between amused and secondhand embarrassment.] But your delivery was better. Most partners would find something like that a little too... violent.
[But it was, at least, a good try, and the enthusiasm is there. The energy is right; the word choice, however...]